Neff paradise

[birdxofxparadise]

NEFF DONNERSHLAG PARADISE

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&&--You, who shall pull the strings

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Name: Ree Lin Atki
Age:14 (er well almost)

Roleplaying Experience:eh 2 years i mostly rp on other non rp sites
How you found the site: eh 2 years i mostly rp on other non rp sites
How you found the site: Ash...errrr Mikari sent it to me

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&&--The character cheat sheet

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Name:Neff Donnerschlag Paradise
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: ice blue
Skin Tone: pale
Height: 6 foot 5

Weight: 170
Wealth: well-off
Sexual Orientation: bisexual
Why they are in La Campana: font]Neff got drunk and his older brother caught him making out with his best friend. He didn't know he was drunk and seriously thought his brother was a straight up gay and sent him to La Campana

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&&--What makes the clock tick

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Likes:
cigarettes,
women,
sex,
money,
birds,
speaking in german,
fancy food,
fancy clothes
Dislikes:
buzzkillers,
crappy movies, pink
, the french!
egg plants,
cats,
hawks,
yellow.
Turn Ons:
blondes,
goths,
vore,
slinky white dresses XD
Turn Offs:
brunnettes
, reds
, albinos
, bondage
Nervous Habits:
nail biting,
blinks more than the average person
Fears:
water
guns
Goals/Aspirations:
to make it big,
make lots of money,
have a threesome with asian twins
Appearance: Long black hair tied back with a red ribbon, blue diamond vocaloid shirt, svest that droops of his shoulder, khakis! Nails panted black. His teeth are capped to look like fangs, Very tall. Slim yet muscular and HOT if I do say so myself.
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He's a non stop chatterbox who never shuts up. He thinks that there's good in everyone even though he knows there isn't. Rather overly cheery disposition. The kinda guy that laughs at his own jokes even though he know's they're not funny

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&&--A glimpse of the past

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Father:Gluck Paradise- 42 (deceased)
Name and age
Mother:Liebe Paradise- 37 (deceased


Sibling/s: Oben Paradise- 20

Other important relatives: Onkel Paradise 44

Pets:no pets
History:Neff was part of a rich family. The stereotypical unhappy rich boy. He had everything but that wasn't enough. A mother that loved him and a father that expected greater things from him than from his brother. He got everything he wanted without lifting a finger. He didn't appreciate his life until he lost it all.

His parents died in a car crash and they had left everything to his uncle. Neff and Oben refused to live with the fat man and his newly gained wealth. They were old enough to live on their own so they did. They took what little money they inherited and moved from Germany to Barcelona


Roleplaying Sample:

Neff looked up at the school and sighed. Why in the world should he have to go here? Sure he was makingout with his best friend but he was wasted! Of course he probably would've maade out with him even without the effect of the booze.

"So this is Hell on earth....not exactly vat I expected but vatever..."

[Admin]

Declined

There are a few reasons. Let's start with your application. It was surprsingly short and uninformative. I'm not sure if it was rushed or if you just really didn't think you needed to put in any effort. Either way, almost every section was too short. If you'd read the rules, we expect each paragraph to be 8+ quality sentences. None of your paragraphs reached that standard. I also heard that your roleplays are, for the most part, one-liners usually, two-liners at best, and that is very disconcerting.

While that's enough to deny your application, you're also getting denied for your interaction in the c-box. You were rude and abrasive to everyone you spoke to, it seemed. You were demanding, and as I recall commented on how 'stupid' the code to fill out was. Here's a bit of information for you: when you're applying for a site, it usually isn't a good idea to insult the admin's choices--if you're actually planning on getting accepted, that is. And I know you're friends with Ash, but you were flagrantly disrespectful and demeaning to her, and that's not something I will tolerate.

The answer is no.

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[birdxofxparadise]

I understand your reasoning. I'm not very used to rp sites in the least. Ash really wanted me to join and I know she likes to have me there so I fealt bad denying her. I caved and joined. I admit I have NO IDEA what I'm doing. I'm awful with technology and I really should've reworded what I said about the code. It's not dumb it actually makes organization of data easier but whenever I have a problem with something technology related I panic. When I panic I snap. It's a habit I'm desperately growing out of. I understand how rushed what little information there is mmust be. This type of rp is in no way what I'm used to. I had to ask Ash on how to really work out what to write down and she didn't know how to help but she was the only one who I had to help me. I love Neff. He is my most used character for anything but I pretty much had to recreate him for this site and it's hard because I'm just not used to this kind of thing. Not suprised you heard of my by habit with RPing....Like I said I'm not used to rp sites. I feel uncomfortable because I see all these people viewing what I've typed and FREAK OUT! I really REALLY just have no idea what I'm doing..... I'm so sorry I've upset you with this. I'm just trying to make my friend happy.

My blatant disregard for everyone during use of the cbox is absolutely UNACCEPTABLE!!! I've had a hard time and when I get stressed I become this entirely different person and act overly rude and crude. I have an ISTP personality type so under stress I may erupt outwardly in inappropriate displays of emotion. The resulting explosive anger or hurt tearfulness is quite unnerving to others and embarrassing to someone usually calm and controlled like myself. Lately I'm being put in positions beyond my control and that happens to everyone and some just don't know how to handle it as well as other. I usually try and put on a smile then freak out if I've taken to much. Ash is very different in this aspect. She can openly tell me what's bothering her and I admire that sooooo much. However she has so much going on in her life and I'm the only person she talks to about. She dumps alot of stuff on me and I want to help her so much but since I'm not letting out my own problems I just get worse. I shouldn't be belittling her on a public chat. It's unfair to her and everyone else.

I can only imagine what you must think of me after my annoying behavior and I would like to apologize yet again even though it doesn't deserve to be accepted. This first impression has been an awful one. I hope you never have to deal with someone with such awful disregard as me. My many illogical fears over that which involves computers has most likely ruined my chance to pal around with Ash on this site. You probably don't trust me on your site knowing how I sometimes handle my problems. It is inexscusable (I don't even think I spelt that correctly) and if you want me off I can understand. I don't really understand rp sites and I probably shouldn't be on one.